Writing Test

One day there was a boy called john he lived with his family. They had a new house in the forest he had three brothers and two  sisters.  He and his three brothers went for a walk in the forest then when they came back there mum went to the shop with dad and his two sister.

Then the boys went and played outside then when they went inside they saw there things starting to disappear then there mum and dad two sister coming they went inside and said what happened here. The boy we came inside and all our things had gono.

But they dropped this note it says  I’m sorry but I like thing and I am having it.  One of the boys disappeared and mum disappeared too then the dad had gun and went outside to shoot some wood then he saw a big bear and he shoot it